You aren't alone hunn. I suffer from depression and that's how i've felt since I was 7 and i'm turning 17. I've written many notes like this one but never showed them. I might think I'm ready to go but I'm not. You'll know when it's ur time and right now is not your time! Great piece by the way 5/5 if you would please read and comment my poems and tell me what you think. Thanx

Smile,
Black~Rose

Amazing Write Yet Again.

Purely Vivid, Emotion, Insane(in a good way)..

Flawless. Well Almost(as none are).

But truly you ARE gifted.. and if you ever feel this way again,. dont give in, instead write, you have talent, and you can touch people with your poems. if you feel alone, and without a purpose, remember this- even if theres no one there, i will be and so will a pen and paper. dotn ever give up.

ok that sounded cheeeeeeeesy.
oh well.

The only other thing i gotsta say is- the last line, i think needs a break.. a space to draw it out like this-

But I can't pick myself up..
from this last(Something)) fall

idk. i just have an idea, and i cant explain it often clearly. lol.

oh wellz

=]]

xx33

Th

Great poem. ( I hope you don't feel this way though... if you do you can talk to me... ) It was written uniquely and i loved how it wasnt about how no one cares about you; It was just like saying that your time is up. Wonderful job! Keep writing! ;)