by William Flores Jul 24, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Look at the sweet and beautiful girl |
by ruth
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was awesome!!! |
i really like this poem! it really does apply to alot of girls in this world today! not that it is a good thing! but....it is the truth! if you get a chance plez comment and rate my poems! |
hey there!! another great work from you!! amazing... have u ever thought of goin in to songwriting... i see these as more of lyrics than a poem!!!! i cud just immagine wut it would sound like!!! take care! |
Very nicely done!!! |
by Angie
Another beautiful write. Sad and touching yet quite powerful. You have an amazing talent. Keep up the wonderful work. |