by Christopher Liau Jul 24, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You walk around as if all is well, |
Another great poem. I love this line: 'Stop blaming others and look within' |
I like your poem...It's describes how my relationship is now... |
by amelia
Nice poem fowler....but i find it kinda hard on the girl....i'd be hurt if i was the gal ur talking bout |
by Natalie84
Wow...if she didn't hear what you were saying then she's an idiot. Very well written. Blunt but so nicely put...I love the last stanza...Excellent ending... :) |
by Atomic
It sounds a bit harsh, but I absolutely adore the last line. |