by Britney Jul 24, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
You know that we've been threw a lot, |
very cute |
by Kayla
good but the flow is a bit rough...nice job though...4/5 keep it up....luv yas mwah |
by Kristi Hurt
AWWWWWWWW that poem is sooooo sweet and o so true! i wish i could write like you can! That poem sounds like it waqs written about me and my boyfriend! |
by Mandy Lou
This is so gorgeous. Even though it's short, it's takes nothing away from the meaning you're trying to convey! Great job... |
by erikka baby
I loved this poem, the flow was off alittle bit because 1 or 2 of the lines were longer than the rest, but I do that sometimes too. The rhyming was perfect though, and I loved this whole poem because I can relate. 5.5 ღ |