Comments : Suicidal pain (for a friend in need)

  • 19 years ago

    by cαtαstrophe--x

    good.5.5
    please vote on my poems <3
    thank you
    keep smiling

  • 19 years ago

    by PassingAngel

    I LOVE THIS POEM! AND I WILL CALL U LOL 5/5
    -PASSINGANGEL

    P.S. DON'T ASK ABOUT THE CAPS LOL

  • 19 years ago

    by livingwith

    this is apoem i can truelly relate to, i have friends that do that all the time, cute them selves to feel better ironic though. How one pain makes another go away, but it always comes back. there is really nothing i can do but except it, that they are good people i can count and wouldnt kill them selves, just bleed. I like this poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Some Random Human

    Very nice, good stuff.

  • 19 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    Thought your poem was really good but rhyme was abit..icky lol especially:
    "Makes me shy in fear
    Just hurt yourself if you dear"
    Was expecting dare..oh well
    Take care and keep up the good work chick
    kt xx

  • 19 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    Thought your poem was really good but rhyme was abit..icky lol especially:
    "Makes me shy in fear
    Just hurt yourself if you dear"
    Was expecting dare..oh well
    Take care and keep up the good work chick
    kt xx

  • 19 years ago

    by dArKgOtHiCgIrL

    great poem! hope 2 see more soon! keep it up. read and comment on sum pof my poems plz if u have time
    -Samantha

  • 19 years ago

    by me

    nice poem great wording

  • 19 years ago

    by M MEM

    this is very good

  • 19 years ago

    by o so lonley

    niice i liked it alot it waz really good

  • 19 years ago

    by ashtyn

    i love ur poem its deep it really touch me and very nice wording u used it

  • 19 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    That's a good poem... it's so sad... but it's really well-written! Keep it up!
    Love always,
    BJ