This actually has a good message in it! Once again using your own style which is like nothing I have read before! Love your work! ~Brooke~

David, :-O!!!! Loved, loved, loved this poem!!! Definatley liked the flow of it my eyes just zoomed on down each line and I love poems that can make me do that!!! Agree with you 100% on this poem...everyone everywhere is looking for something or someone....I hope you find what you are looking for!! Great Job on this poem...this def. made me smile!
5..
~Chelsey~

This was good, but I think you could do better...You set a pretty high standard for your writing and this one's almost there...just my opinion, it means nothing! I didn't rate it real low, I gave it 4.

Very good....although the pattern of the poem threw me off....parts ryhmed and others didnt...it was kind of distracting to the meaning of your poem....4/5 nice job! luv yas mwah

-kayla-

hmm it was good, not the best poem but certainly not the worst. 4/5