i liked your poem..it relates to me..i feel the same way..good job. 5/5 keep up the work.

great job. i know where your coming from. 5/5

i share your opinion wuts the point in lying you only get caught and make it worse xox fallen

Intense stuff, Ashleigh. It scared me just a little bit, but intimidation doesn't matter, because this poem is magnificent. I can tell you really try with your stuff, because you can really feel this sort of emotion radiating from the words, which you clearly spilled onto paper from your heart. 5 out of 5.

many can relate,good point,but there are no similies or metaphors,not much rhyming and no editting.

i can relate, i dont have many friends that are girls, because they all lie an backstabb you, its like why cant i have one real, one true frined that will always be ther. great poem!
xoxo samara

Not everyone is a good friend. They have to earn it. Some fail to make it. Then they were a friend in the first place. Just be careful who you pick.

wow... i know what you mean i have had that happen so many times... but i guess that's their faults!!

great job gurlie!!!!!!!!!!!! i miss talking to ya..............xoxoxoxo

GREAT job!!! I can relate.. I loved it!!! Truly great poet you are!!! :-)
Stephanie

I know how that feels :( i like the poem, its really good :D