That concept at the end is very true!! You never know who you are talking to, when it comes to what they hide underneath!! Great job!! Keep writin! 5/5

God I relate so much to this one, it almost made me cry!!! That was so great, I love ti!!! Sorry that you have to go through this =0(....Just one surgestion: you should try to make the lines more even....Other than that the poem was perfect, nice flow and rhyming....Keep up the good work!!!

*Hugs sabrina*

awww hunni...i know what it feels like to be called things like that..right after my mates started to make fun of me coz they didnt belive that 7 of mates hav died this year gareth saw my cuts n scars and started calling me a suicidal christian/ b..it..ch...and it really hurt all i cud do is cry

but then i read a bible verse at cell that night
and in it God sed that those who belive in Him shall suffer a lil while but then if they rely on HIm, He will make you perfect, happy, and settle you down

stay strong bbe
im here for you alwayz n forever and so is GOD...kk

ur in my prayers ok

stay here for me plz

ur frend
~ANGEL~