i liked it alot keep up the good work 5/5.

Awwl.. very well written! your a great poet keep up the great work!

ERICA!! what is this about?"??????!?!?!?! What happened?? Well its a good poem though....5/5 keep it up!
*Becky*

This poem was so deep and so sad. If you really feel this way, than I'm truely sorry. The rhyming was ALMOST perfect, and the flow was very good. Keep it up. xX

such sadness and sad emotions in this poem

Good work

-Josiah

I have to say this piece is unique! It's very powerful and deep! Your emotions showed very well! Take Care! Brooke~

I really like this! Mine are getting kinda scary, but if you want to ckeck them out that'd be great!

This was a bit too choppy for me, was really hard to get through I think if you went through it sentance for sentance you would see my point anyway nice try. I like the idea though...

This wasn't the best of your poesm, so I gave it a 4/5.

Your other poems are more desribed, and this looks as though you gotten a bit lazy. =)

However, I did enjoy it.

I just thought you could have done better with your talent.

My favourite lines were:

"So deep into the night,
Your just one call away.
But no my heart feels tight,
Break the rules if i may."

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