your right that is different I haven't read any of your other stuff yet but i hope it's as good as this.
5/5

I love this poem, and I totally agree with you. All my friends have stabbed me in the back at one time or another, no ones really your friend. Your very talented, keep writing. xX

Oooh, very good. I loved the format, and the flow was great. Good work, 5/5
Car

Wow, that was very good. Blew me away. This was really good. You are very talented. I loved how you rhymed and the whole outline. Nice job. Keep up the great work. Peace. 5/5

Wow great poem. i can definitly relate to this poem

A friend is a friend who is not always there

i dont understand that.. doesnt really makes sense to me, kinda contradictory.. other than that... good flow and rhyme scheme.. my fav stanza was the second... good job.. 4/5

Not you're best work but it was still great! compared to all the others of yours i've read..it was alright, but it was different so thats the bonus! 5/5