Wow
turn this into a song
id buy like 12 of the cds

Omg i love that!!it is soo beautifully wirtten!! great job and thank you for commenting on mine!
xoxo

Great poem! very sad but I can relate to it. 5/5 And thank you for commenting on one of my poems, rate and comment some of my latest poems to, I would love to hear what you think about those.

xx A.

All I can say is wow.. I'm impressed!!! that is a great poem!! I give it a 5/5 but it deserves more!!!!

Wow, this poem gives a whole new meaning to writting with a passion. it is writen with simple words yet you manage to play around with them using different devices and making it sound great and puting a lot of feeling and meaning to it. im sure many poeple can relate to this poem. take care and i hope things get better if this poem is true.

Wonderful piece of writing! Certainly a nice song! You've done a wonderful job!

Amazing wow i loved it. keep it up cuz your a really talented writer!

Favorite line:

The tears start falling one by one.
Fall like the rain when there's no sun.

That was a great song well written and very heart felt thanks for the comments and the positivity in the comment

To you who,
care I thank you big
you saved me from this hole I dig
to took the time
to share a rhyme
and now I see you through

Wow its amazing but sad :( i have blue eyes too you know but they dont look so good after they have shed a few tears :( 5/5 for the poem.

Wow..this poem is interesting........very good