Overall, a really good poem and I quite liked it. Sad to read though and I'm very sorry for you.

However speaking for the poem itself it would be so much better if you used the words othere than numbers (two not 2) it makes it better.
Also another thing - It's in one big slab, maybe try breaking it down a bit giving it a better flow and once again making it easier to read.
And, final thing the capital letters at the begining of each line isn't necessary- only for the first line.

Once again - a good poem, a sad read.

Well done

-Lyd

I enjoyed your poem. Thanks for the comment.