Tears from the soul / Knowing

by enfant du tordu chagrin   Jul 25, 2005


I feel the tears well at my eyes
But I can’t let them out
They build and build with no release
And I begin to doubt

These are unlike normal tears
They come straight from the soul
And from what your absence left
A great and gaping, painful hole

I seem so incomplete
Like a part of me is gone
And my heart feels oh so heavy
With knowledge of what is done

Knowing that this pain won’t fade
Knowing you’re not with me
Knowing of my hopes for us
Knowing it’ll never be

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  • 19 years ago

    by Falling Up

    I really like your poem... so you want some help? well, to make it flow better, dont say And so much.... that will make it sound more smooth.. thats pretty much it.. its a very well written poem so i dont know what your talking about when you say you arent good, because you really are.. please comment on my poetry too! thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by NannO

    aww.. this is so sad.. and also deep.. hope ur ok.. i lyk the rhyme
    keep up the gud work

  • 19 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    excellent!! you're very talented. take care and stay strong!!
    -xXx-

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