excellent!! you're very talented. take care and stay strong!!
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aww.. this is so sad.. and also deep.. hope ur ok.. i lyk the rhyme
keep up the gud work

I really like your poem... so you want some help? well, to make it flow better, dont say And so much.... that will make it sound more smooth.. thats pretty much it.. its a very well written poem so i dont know what your talking about when you say you arent good, because you really are.. please comment on my poetry too! thanks