by .. !!-D a R r i N-!! .. Jul 25, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
Listen. |
Wow i really like this poem you have a lot a talent...hopefully i can write liek that 1 day.. |
Amazing topic and meaning. The world is such a cold place but by the time many people are old enough to help make a big difference they give up and are turning cold themselves. |
by +-Unique J-+
D!!!!! TH@T PO3M W@S HOTT ON D R3AL M3N U GOT LYRICS!!! |
by -Beauty-
jaz.....lol....i mean darin..my bad i 4got bout that..ya poem is hott....it is very different but sooo true bout life....im gon make some poems 2...not as good as jenae...tho..lol |
by Ashli
this was really good...i like the ending...great job! 5/5 |