Bullys

Very good ,and as a mother of a teenager sadly being the victim of bulling it opened my mind to why the bullies do what they do.Maybe you could be so kind as to read a poem of mine called helpless ,its how I feel because of my son being bullied.Thank you so much for your comment on one of my latest ones.Take care ,and keep writing you have great talent.

Good choice of words with superb flow..
LIke it alot

God Bless!

Your poems arent really my scene. maybe a little too immature in places for me, thats not to say they arent good. i think for someone your age, they are very well written. They will get better as time goes on, thats for sure.
xxx

Thank so much esther!!!! ur the sweetest
i love your writing :) so truthful
kat - xox

Good poem i liked