by Jenn
i use to be a bully in 4th grade so i now this is real it's true we are mean but i love the poem 5/5 good job! |
by lil loca
Man thats true by the way thanks f da comment |
by faith
I think the last and first time i got bullied was in 1st grade so i beat the kid with an umbrella...lol..ya i was violent..but now my lil cousin is getting bullied so im gald u have this up here so ppl who need to read poems like this can...anyway i like it alot ..keep it up |
by Robie Lincer
Thats another good poem! you got the talent the flow was good and it was fun to read! i was a bully once :$ but not anymore lol |
Good poem i liked |
by herewithme
Thank so much esther!!!! ur the sweetest |
by Tara Kay
Your poems arent really my scene. maybe a little too immature in places for me, thats not to say they arent good. i think for someone your age, they are very well written. They will get better as time goes on, thats for sure. |
by Misstress
Good choice of words with superb flow.. |
by June
Very good ,and as a mother of a teenager sadly being the victim of bulling it opened my mind to why the bullies do what they do.Maybe you could be so kind as to read a poem of mine called helpless ,its how I feel because of my son being bullied.Thank you so much for your comment on one of my latest ones.Take care ,and keep writing you have great talent. |