Speeding

Spectacular poem! one of my favoerites! You are definately becoming a favorite! :D

I like the idea, and you have some pretty freaking awesome phrases in there, so good job!

My suggestion, should you choose to want one ;) , would be this:

Try adding a little bit more description, cause it's a bit hard to follow.

Hmm. it's not quite as good as your other one. But I like how it circulates, I don't think thats the right word, but I'm sure you get my point. You've great rhyming abilities. You seem to rhyme without killing your poem, unlike me.

I liked this, I thought it was full of meaning yet straight to the point.

Excellent. Short, punchy and to the point. I loved everything about this poem - your word choice was exemplary. I could not agree more with the message. Well done. 5/5