omg-if ur talking about meth i know what ur talking about 4real! That stuff has had me for a little over year. but i've been clean 7 days today! Longest time ever except in rehab but i couldn't have gotten it if i wanted it there. im trying to shake the habit tho. if i don't it'll kill me.
This was a really good peom. it was so simple yet it had so much meaning. i liked it alot.Keep it up! ***Leah

hey leah is right it is very simple but had alot of meaning good job 5/5 keep it up!

Great poem esther, a small poem with a big meaning. its great 5/5!

Verri nice.

I really like:
"Kill the speed,
You do not need"
and
"The grave you dig,
Will not forgive"
they are awesome lines.

First off your poem was great and that really means allot cause i know of someone who lost their kid because os sdeedin. and second thanks for the comment please keep reading my poems your comment means allot to me.

Um its ok. there isnt a lot of depth..but i really liked this:
To dig a grave,
You could have saved

It's a short poem, but it has some power.. the meaning of it.. I liked it.. Nice job.. keep it up :))))

Yea speed is bad! i love the use of words you put there the flow was great!

It was really good, i liked the message behind it, it was strong and to the point. keep it up.

Excellent metaphoric poem that can be viewed many different ways, I really like it.

Nicely written and interesting concept.

Ooh i really really like this one a lot.i like the symbols that used with the grave and such..lol very nice. keep it up.

What a strong message. Dont speed! *speeds* Again I find it amusing! Are all your poems this amusing? I guess Id have to read them all to find that out. The line 'Dont kill the speed' confused me a little and put a stutter in my rythym so perhaps you could re-arrange that. Otherwise what a nice little poem!

Excellent. Short, punchy and to the point. I loved everything about this poem - your word choice was exemplary. I could not agree more with the message. Well done. 5/5

I liked this, I thought it was full of meaning yet straight to the point.

Hmm. it's not quite as good as your other one. But I like how it circulates, I don't think thats the right word, but I'm sure you get my point. You've great rhyming abilities. You seem to rhyme without killing your poem, unlike me.

I like the idea, and you have some pretty freaking awesome phrases in there, so good job!

My suggestion, should you choose to want one ;) , would be this:

Try adding a little bit more description, cause it's a bit hard to follow.

Spectacular poem! one of my favoerites! You are definately becoming a favorite! :D