Wolf (haiku)

by Fig   Jul 25, 2005


The black ragged wolf
still sings to the crying moon
but it never smiles

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  • 19 years ago

    by ||The...Nameless||

    This gave me goosebumps and that is such a good think thanks well done again

  • 19 years ago

    by HeavenzEyez

    Cool, keeps you in a cold, chilly mood, lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Navy Blue Heart

    to bulk out my last comment which i did in a rush! I really really love it lu! really simple but chilling and significant at the same time. nyah! keep on with the lovliness my love!

  • 19 years ago

    by Bryan Berry

    but i thought u were a silver wolf... lol

    very awes0me. good job creating an image with few words. good job making a sad atmosphere.

  • 19 years ago

    by Strange Angel

    do wolves have the correct facial muscles to smile? i really dont know. but im not an expert on wolves, they probably do, but smiling is also a very human way of expressing emotion, and i dont know any other animals (apart from my dog, tango) who smiles. im probably worng again. i may go and become a wolf expert so i dont make a fool of myself. i may not, as i ahve to go hang out the washing. anyway, i came to comment to say "hurry up and write more poems lucyfer!!! i need more morbidity!" ok. im done. c ya's.

    ~madfry~