really deep, I like it alot.

amazing!!!! *5* i love the last stanza! im really sorry if this happened. take care and stay strong!
-xXx-

Lovely poem, its always horrible to watch someone so ill even if you're not particularly close to them.. Love you

xxxx

Great poem you have touched one of my fears become old and fragile very touching!

take care

Incrediable imagery! So strond i could see it feel it, sense it, like I was there. Powerful words! Stay strong!

Its nearly time for me to go and I just wanted to say, I'm missing you already, I cant wait for this week to be over, I love you so so much and I hope you feel the same, you make me so happy, you make me laugh and have the best times..

I love you, with all my heart, please be there when I get home..
I will be there for you, always

xxxxxxx

It's hard watching someone you love die slowly. I remember it. Stay strong, I'm always here for you.
Luv Scarlet xxxx

Excellent word choice. The imagery was awesome. Very well done. Great poem.
~Faith otF

Wow you are such a great writer i gave you a 5 and added you to my fav.