Wow, that made me cry
This is an excellent piece of work, it has so much passion, I can feel it in the words..as if you're standing next to me reading it.....you have a ton of potential, I know you're going to be famous.

Great job!
Love DFK

OMG.. that was just so... heartbreaking.. i reli cant find any other word to describe the feelings ur words in this poem evoked in me.. i mean, that was just full of emotion.. u didnt use rhyme a lot, and wen u did u used it in specific lines or stanzas wich i thot was very appropriate... am sorry if this has happend 2 u or any1 u noe..
keep it up.. uve got the talent
stay strong
nannoush