wonderful and deep.. i really likd the topic coz its a new one to me..i love this part:
You can stop the hiding,
I can read it in your eyes.
it caught my eye..
gr8 rhyme
keep it up
nouna
thnx 4 the comment

That was really original. I loved it.

I want a sandy beach, and a chestnut sky
I want to lie beside you, as the stars mantle our eyes

What do you mean Why I put that? It just basically says how much I want to have him by myside, I feel safe with him. He's so perfect. Ahh :) It's just hard to trust someone. I'm sure you know what I mean.

Welll... Keep submittin ur poems darlin, cuz I'm out of ones to read!

GREAT JOB!!! 5/5 ur better than him! keep it up!!! remember:
"guys r lyke outhouses always taken or full of shit!!" lol ^.~*

I love it cause I can relate

She doesnt love me like before, she has some1 else now. im happy for her

Yah, it was just that i couldnt belive it in the start, so i was a bit weired and wrote these poems

Wow that was deep, i just loved it.
great work

all the best and take care

I think i already commented on this... but i love it. The third stanza is my fave =) great job!
JL