Comments : My Hearts Maiden Voyage

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Cool poem. Love your style.
    "What once entered this world crying
    Shall now leave this world dying."
    I also love those two lines. Very cool poem.
    ~Faith of the Fallen

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    love the metaphorical use...really effective.
    take care x x x

  • 19 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    This poem is my favorite. I totally agree with this. But your standards are what you need and desire:) Dont ever lower them, because you will find perfection in your eyes, the one who you will see, as... perfect!:)

    Love ya,
    Ana*