aww felicia thats really good...you really do have talent...keep it up...5/5

Okay you know what i noticed and this may sound harsh but oh well im not trying to be mean im reading your poems and they flow well and everything and they rhyme well but the message what the poem is actually saying isnt getting to me...like i read this twice and now im commenting thinking wait what was the poem about...love...okay but maybe dont be so simple change the format of your poem i know this one suits you well and probably comes easy for you but stepping out of your comforst zone creates cretivity i like your style of writing but i think you should try something different just once