Too Bad She's Beautiful...

by /: Stray--X--Wolf :\   Jul 25, 2005


Passion at first glance, stalled to speak its words.
Breeze sent the whispers, silence sung its sinless song.
There it was, me and you, her and him.
Perfect, was it not? Bliss only can last so long.

Unlike to any other, I let my emotions flow out to you.
For once I wasn't afraid to feel, wasn't afraid to speak.
Was this love? Was this the tale tell feeling?
Or was it just a momentary high..?

Something went astray, I'm unsure what..
Everything became shattered, broken and decayed.
Left me, for someone you already had at the start.
All I have to show for my love is a razor blade now...

Tears made a colorless mist for me that night.
The closest person can always hurt you the worse...
My life should be secluded, with only the shadows.
Too bad she was beautiful...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Everything became shattered, broken and decayed.
    Left me, for someone you already had at the start.

    thats a beautiful line...it described my old love so truely...when u are left alone, betrayed by somone you gave you heart to, and then they went back to somone who had left them. Love is cruel. Living is crueler.

    weeping wolf

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Beautiful...I agree with B.R.F. Angel ^ ...written gracefully (YES)...and emotional...and real...I love the ending especially...

    "Tears made a colorless mist for me that night.
    The closest person can always hurt you the worse...
    My life should be secluded, with only the shadows.
    Too bad she was beautiful..."

    I relate to the last part...the last two lines...just great final words there....

    xxx
     

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