What If

by Joey P   Jul 25, 2005


What If,

My life would be great and not live with it in shame.

What If,

My life wasn't control by depression and I wouldnt feel its flame.

What If,

I didnt hate myself and wasn't cutting so deep.

What If,

I pray to GOD and tell him to take me when I'm sleep.

What If,

I had a different life.

What If,

I didn't feel like it was being played like rolling dice.

What If,

I didn't have to look back at the the pain I hide.

What If,

Someone was there whenever I wanted to die.

What If,

I feel like I don't belong here.

What If,

Wishing people can feel my pain or hearing the pain that I fear.

What If,

I didn't look in the mirror and wanting to go and scream.

What If,

I woke up from this sadness and this pain was just a dream.

I got inspired to do this by by 112 because they made a song called What If but for a lost relationship way, so i jus wanted to switch it. Hope ya like it.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Change

    Hey! Great Poem! I can totally relate! I sufferd from depression and anxiety so I had really similar feelings! Well done! Dont stop writing! 5!

  • 19 years ago

    by F U

    Great, very deep poem, u r very talented writer. keep it up, 5/5 frm me, oh and thanx for commentin on my poem =)

    rach
    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow... great poem, I loved it, had a good beginning and strong ending, 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    I loved the way you wrote it.
    you seem really talented in writing.
    I was just reading "Through The
    Looking Glass" profile. that was
    why I decided to check out some
    of your poems. I'm happy I decided
    to do this. keep writing.
    take care,
    marjan

  • 19 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Hey I loved it!!! You're a really great poet.. I'm always here if you need 2 talk. :-)
    Stephanie

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