very well done. 5/5 good job.
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:'( im so sorry, im always here for you....stay strong
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This poem was is so sad and dark, but I loved how you described things so well. There's alot of feeling and emotion in this poem and it flowed so well. Your very talented. Keep up the great work ღ

ur poem was dark.mysterious and the ryhthm was completely excellent, you definitly have talent... adios 5/5