Ok... didn't compleatly understand the poem. but it was short and i like short poems, straight to the point :D verry good!

You do not need to experience a loss of a change to know how terrible it is and to have a stand on it.

Short.very short.and i didnt reallu understand the winter is bold part.but,overall it was pretty good:D
--lexie

Good Job on this one i loved it!