by allison Jul 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She throws her self down upon the floor |
by Shawna
Great poem, but I hope it's not about you or anyone you know. It is soo sad. I have lost a lot of friends to suicide. One of my poems 'You Now Must Go' is to one of my best friends, he killed himself. It was awful!! 5/5 |
by Samantha
Wow that was outstanding... it was so sad and emotional... just fantastic!!! keep it up defenitly a 5/5 |
by wendy
As i said on your last poem i read you write beautifully i am very impressed |
by M MEM
Ahhhh this is really good, tells such a sad story. 5/5 |
by Marta
Very sadly written with alot of emotion, really good job! Keep on writing and thank you for your comment :) |