omgosh that was sooooooooo sad. it made me cry. awesome poem. i loved it

this was truely said and the rhyming was very good

-Josiah

Aww thats so sad. but i hope its not true because like I've once heard from someone "suicide is the permanent solution to a temporary problem" please consider that and don't do anything too drastic.

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~*Christina

Very sadly written with alot of emotion, really good job! Keep on writing and thank you for your comment :)

Ahhhh this is really good, tells such a sad story. 5/5

As i said on your last poem i read you write beautifully i am very impressed

Wow that was outstanding... it was so sad and emotional... just fantastic!!! keep it up defenitly a 5/5

sammie

Great poem, but I hope it's not about you or anyone you know. It is soo sad. I have lost a lot of friends to suicide. One of my poems 'You Now Must Go' is to one of my best friends, he killed himself. It was awful!! 5/5