UR good!!!!!!

UR good!!!!!!

Dark but with a sense of humor almost..witty kinda...but its sooooo meaningful. by not telling the sin u commited straight up, u make the reader kinda think harder...very good...
love ya lots,
sore

I like the concept behind this one, and it shows a little bit of a dark humor side, i like it.

I liked it. It told a good stary and it was a good read. But the flow was a little off because the sentences very so much in length. 4/5

Woah. that was really cool,ive never seen a poem done like that before. it pts a twist on things. nice job. i like the dark humor of it.