The second paragraph was hard to read I think it should be reworded slightly, but it was a good poem as cutting themes go. I wrote one called I Never Knew I thought it was good enough. Take a look at it. Being that you are so young and I am not going to presume to understand what you feel I would have to say this although you may not like or understand it now every action you do effect those that are close to you so please take this in mind take care and keep up the good work.

Oh I forgot the title (I am not sorry about being me)

Awesome poem..Hopefully your friends not mad! 5/5!

<3 Katie

Honesty is good...I hope things worked out okay with your friend...and hopefully you're not cutting...people such as close friends often feel it's their fault...like they could have done something... stuff like that...touching poem...

xxx