I love this poem, it can be an awesome song... Your really good at writting, if you want you should also check out some of mine... YOU ROCK...
ALterZ

wow,
i love the bit of talking about the girl in the mirror, symboizing that u don't even recognize ur self anymore. wonderful poem i can totally relate,
keep it up!
peace,
*rachel*

This seems more of a song lol. I really liked it. I also like how used the words "the girl in the mirror" as a symbol. It flowed and rhymed pretty good. Well done!

Could feel the anguish,liked it.