by Mandy Lou Jul 25, 2005
category :
Life, society /
about society
Why is there such violence |
that was good... makes me wanna make my little brothers go pretend to be MEN!! lol.... good tho |
I LOVE THIS POEM HUN!! =] |
Very Good Poem Keep it Up i look foward to reading more |
by Kane Burden
Verry inspirational poem Hun, underlining that we must act now, or dig our own grave. Great :D Kind regards from Kane x |
by Zer0riginZ
I believe tis a good poem, just one thing though.... YOU'VE got a few things from a poem I was writing but nevermind you may keep them. This reminds me of my style but very lil. 5/5 I think it is good, but if your going to write such things enrich the text a bit more. |