Lost In Black

by EpithetPoet   Jul 26, 2005


As i lay on my bed crying
The covers swallow me whole
Suck me deep in its core
Trapped with my barren soul

Still clutching my knees
I fall further into blackness
My tears zigzagging to light
My body diving into darkness

I'm suspended in air
Two feet from the ground
Slowly drift down into silk
Surrounded by a box of brown

I lay there quietly
My soul looking down
Smiling of its forgotten host
Who forms a constant frown

She flies away free
Never looking back
As i lay there stable
Lost in the black

*not very good i know*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Krete

    Actually it is pretty good ... if you read into it - as I always do and tend to imply way to much - their is a sort of synergist type theme in it. Synergist being a ... coherent of drug induced experience of some sort. An Interesting look into what, if intended, of the effects of drugs.

    Good!

    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Black~Rose

    not bad hunn!! keep writing 5/5 please read and comment my poems thanx

    Smile,
    Black~Rose

  • 19 years ago

    by Leighann

    I thought it was very good... shows a lot of emotion..