I thought it was very good... shows a lot of emotion..

not bad hunn!! keep writing 5/5 please read and comment my poems thanx

Smile,
Black~Rose

Actually it is pretty good ... if you read into it - as I always do and tend to imply way to much - their is a sort of synergist type theme in it. Synergist being a ... coherent of drug induced experience of some sort. An Interesting look into what, if intended, of the effects of drugs.

Good!

5/5