creepy I liek it, that was a very interesting poem, in a good way:). I like how everything was described so wonderfully!

I love the description, differnt things you usually see, in a good way

wow, u used good imagery, well written and interesting, i liked it. could u comment on mine at all? thanks

well done
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I love the description in this poem it was creep and mysterious!

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I love it it is great

Nice poem! Keep it up!

This is a very beautiful poem. I really like all the adverbs you use in this piece. I loke your writing style, like that of longfellow. Keep it up. A 5.