Comments : My Broken Pieces

  • 19 years ago

    by Dan

    being as u asked, this guy sounds like an @ssh0le, he obviuosly doesnt love u if hes pressuring u into all of these things u dont want to do, i think u should find some1 else, u must realize that there are plenty of other guys out there for u, it is not worth being depressed over, U WILL FIND SOME1 ELSE.

  • 19 years ago

    by miracle

    Hi, i love this poem so much, a year ago i was the same.. well i had other problems but that is the way i felt i was broken, now it's al coming back and i don't know what to do either
    I can't move on with the boyfriend i now have 'cause he keeps reminding me, as i listen to your boyfriend he does seems not to respect you And that is the thing a relationship is build on for sure.. You should listen too foolish from ashanti ;) that's what i listen too all the time.. Ofcourse i give you a 5 for this poem the way you can describe things is macnificent, please comment on some of mine too i would apreciate it .. Keep up the good work, and don't let anyone stand you in the way of your dreams

  • 19 years ago

    by NannO

    well.. i lykd ur poem, with all the rhyme and the deep words.. i glad u wont let him "force u into situations u cant bare", but it shudnt come at the cost of ur happiness.. u shudnt be depressed, but u shud be gald u put ur foot down and spoke ur mind.. dun let any1 make u d things u dun wanna do.. and i noe this is hard 4 u, especially that u love him and all, but in situations like this, u shud set ur priorities straight... maybe talkin it over with him wud make it a lil better
    hope things work out
    i love ur piece
    take care
    nouna