This was a good poem for the faithful. I would ask you to take a peek at the Unexpected Guest and tell me what you think this was a good read all and all...

Wow powerful and dark! I loved it! I like the way you described the path you choose in life! Great poem! Very well written and thoughtout! Take Care! Brooke~

gr8 goin.. i lovd this one.. powerful message between the lines.. gr8 rhyme.. i wud jus lyk to ask ya if u cud space it in stanzas to make it easier 2 read...
thats all i gotta say..
keep goin
nouna