You're so close it hurts...(finished!)

by Krispie   Jul 26, 2005


It’s like you’re on the other side of the frozen pond,
Waiting…
And I’m running on the ice,
Trying my hardest to get to you
But I’m slipping and getting nowhere
Finally I fall and a tear runs down my cheek
As I look up to see you walking away...

Wondering if there will ever be anyone,
Who would care to come and pick me up
And help me to the other side

But until then,
I’ll sit here
On the cold ice
Hoping to fall in,
…that would end all of my miseries

But don’t worry,
I’m still watching you walk away
Hoping at one point,
You’ll turn around…
Realizing that you forgot me

I should have known
That you weren’t here to stay
You’re no different then the rest
With all your lies and broken promises

I was such a fool for even thinking
..For even a second
That you actually cared
‘Cause if you did
You’d be here giving me a hand to help me up
Instead of walking away

If only you knew
How much I really need you now…
And forever
Then maybe you wouldn’t be walking away

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  • 19 years ago

    by Brittany

    Krispie..That was so good!..i feel the same way everyday..This was a very good peom..and you worked hard and put all your heart into it..i hope he finally realizes what he is leaving behind!