Locked doors
by Till Death Do Us Part Jul 26, 2005
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Does love heal wounds or make them worse than what they already are? The answer is unknown and will most likely stay unknown...Many say they have the answer but is that their answer..or yours? Is that what you believe..Or what you are lead to believe? I have fell in and out of Love...and still can't decided my answer... I guess..the one true answer lies somewhere in your heart... Maybe your true love is the key to happiness..the key to unlock your Love..Or maybe it's the key to depression..sadness and death....I guess you cannot know the answer until you know who your one true love is....Only then..Can you get the keys to unlock the doors of your heart.. |
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16 years ago
by WhiskeyGirl
Lovely poem.
I can relate.
Take care, keep writing.
5/5
Sincerly, Sammie-Lee. -
18 years ago
by Sean Allen
"them worse then what they already are?"
should be "than" instead of "then"
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"the key to unlock you Love"
should be 'your', not 'you'
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The poem was written very much like a piece of prose, which doesn't bother me at all, it was different and that caught my attention. The general message of the poem was philosophical, and it did not rhyme, nor did it have a rhythm. As that is the case, none of those things will be critiqued, as it'd be silly to critique something that wasn't intended.
I liked the poem, and would suggest making the grammatical changes I listed above. -
18 years ago
by sierra
Hey. u remember me from chat when that "issue" came up? i just wanted to let u know i luv this poem becuz it is so true. ppl think the answer is obvious to that question, but really, its not. i look for watrd to seeing more of ur work as well as getting feed back from u on my work. later buddy ;o)
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18 years ago
Wow thats deep!! LOVES IT!! was really good...
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18 years ago
by RachiBubbles
Awesome nice work keep up the good work!
