Great poem Max. Keep up the good work.
Love Kala

I like this poem. keep writing

Taylor, my old friend that was an amazing poem if i might say. I hope you remember me, my account got old so i just made a new one, good to see your still writting, keep writting strong my friend, Much Ado - Max

Nicely done i liked it

I really like it. youll get your true Love one day. and then you will be able to tell. i love the way that didnt write it in poem form, but more in a paragraph. its different

Awesome nice work keep up the good work!

Wow thats deep!! LOVES IT!! was really good...

Hey. u remember me from chat when that "issue" came up? i just wanted to let u know i luv this poem becuz it is so true. ppl think the answer is obvious to that question, but really, its not. i look for watrd to seeing more of ur work as well as getting feed back from u on my work. later buddy ;o)

"them worse then what they already are?"
should be "than" instead of "then"
~~~
"the key to unlock you Love"
should be 'your', not 'you'
~~~
The poem was written very much like a piece of prose, which doesn't bother me at all, it was different and that caught my attention. The general message of the poem was philosophical, and it did not rhyme, nor did it have a rhythm. As that is the case, none of those things will be critiqued, as it'd be silly to critique something that wasn't intended.

I liked the poem, and would suggest making the grammatical changes I listed above.

Lovely poem.
I can relate.
Take care, keep writing.
5/5

Sincerly, Sammie-Lee.