omg dis is sooo good.i can feel da anger in it and shit.reali emo.
lov it heaps and u heaps
oxoxox

omg steph *gives rib cracking hug* plz just try to make it though one day at a time, Don't think about anything except making it through, it doesnt matter if it hurts anyone else just try to get better
Love you soooo much
Love Loz

i agree with them both i know how you feel i know what your going through on sunday i though i was dead bcoz icut really deep and did eat all day or anything i thought it was my time but guess not and i still wish i was loved this poem very deep emotion

keep strong
andrea

Wow...dont we all feel like this sometimes...its really good...you can feel the anger and the impulse and the hastiness of it...gets your heart pumping just reading it...like I said...really good poem

dont say that steph...please. man i dont even know you and i can already tell ur a nice and obviously loved person. please try and stay...

wow...that poems so powerful, it really made me think (and now THATS rare!) anywho really good pieces of poetry here!!