Hurting you, hurting me

by the middle   Jul 26, 2005


Hurting me, hurting you,
with every blade that cuts through.
breaks my heart to see you like this,
my concern and love for you is too much to dismiss.
so listen carefully to what i say,
and the sun light up another day.
honey, i know you're hurting, but i'll always be here,
i'll always be your friend and i'll always be near.
i know you don't believe me, and you think that i would'nt care,
but have i ever let you down? haven't i always been there?
You have been my constant, you've listened and you've shared,
i tell you everything, with you my soul is bared.
you make me laugh and make me smile,
just stay with me a little while.
so don't leave me alone in this world so dead,
stay and we'll help each other through the days ahead.

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  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I'd say take Freak's suggestions... it's great...I love this one.

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    Beautiful, and very touching, it's so nice to read about friendships like yours. One thing though...
    "and maybe the sun light up another day.
    honey, i know you're hurting, but i'll always be here,
    i'll always be your friend and i'll always be here."
    I believe you meant to say "the sun will light up another day"
    And for that last rhyme instead of using the same word you could you "near"

    Nice job still. Keep up the good work
    ~*Freak*~