Hi sweety :)
''I want a sandy beach, and a chestnut sky
I want to lie beside you, as the stars mantle our eyes'' why did y0u put th0se tw0 sentenses in?? *I like it*
perfectly sh0wn y0ur talent again :D
*hugs* PunkChick

I d0n't kn0w why I asked it.. th0se sentences keep on replaying in my mind ;).. there w0nderfull :)
*hugs* PunkChick
P.s.. d0 y0u have msn??

hey this poem is lovely.. great job! i really enjoyed reading it you're such a talented writer and i hope you keep writing! fantastic job!
-take care
-BrokenSmile
p.s. if you have time please check out some of my poems

Wow really love it really really heart taking keep it up