Stupid poem

by ashley   Jul 26, 2005


My dad ruined my life
he didn't listen to his family
not even his wife
look at what he's done to me

Because of the move
i lost my best friend
because of the move
i lost my boyfriend

I'm never going to forget
the time i used to enjoy
I'm never going to forget
that one special boy

i hate living here
i have about one friend
i hate living here
i will till the end

Is it soon?
the end, i mean
I don't want to die
or make a scene

but i can't take it
this fake happiness
i can't take it
this feeling of emptiness

I'll move back home
with a car and a plan
I'll get into college
and do the best i can

So in a few years
I will rebuild my life
that way all my dad will have
his his house and his wife

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  • 19 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    Ah..well written. But about your comment on my poem "Fake Smiles And Stupid Lies"..I don't wan't to kill myself..I just write the pain I feel and it comes out like this. But if you get the chance..how'd you know that my poems are based one one girl? Maybe you were guessing but no ones figured that out before..5.

    Ian

  • 19 years ago

    by Pilar

    Sorry i meant "i love nirvana" ^^

  • 19 years ago

    by Pilar

    I loved this poem u're very talented
    i loved nirvana too! :P and i love kurt cobain :) ...what a pity he's dead...
    keep on writting cause you're talented
    i would like to know what u think of my stuff if u have some time or somethin i would really appreciate it

    adios! take care

    p i l i

  • 19 years ago

    by Joyce Duboise

    good poem sorry u lost all you had!

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