Aww hun, I’m sorry if this happened, but bloody brilliant poem. nice use of words and sentences, 5/5 keep it up!

Hope this isn't a true story, cause this is so damn sad.....But a really really great poem, very emotional!!! =0)

*Hugs Sabrina*

Welcome to the club

ONG this is nice. keep up the good work. reminds me of a time in the past.

This is really good!
your such a great writer.

I don't know why.... oh my god this is so weird for me to say.... but it made my eyes tear up... which never usually happens, its sad... great job, 5/5..

Wow a good write.

Hey There!!

that was a graet poem...i hope it was just an imagination....but great one...even i f u had to go thro this...its amazing how u converted this incident to a poem...this one is amazing...take care and all the best

Wow a great poem poem filled wit so much emotion. wish u al the best n keep up the wonderful poems. 5/5

I hope its just a poem nt not the reality. but really very nice poem , full of emotions.
keep writing dear
bharti

Hey there,
omg... so sad and heartfelt.. and very well named,"lipstick stain". I like it. I have to say my favourite lines are..
Following your rules, I played the love game
But in your heart, I couldn't find my name
I just think those are beautifully written.

Monique

Omg
this is really really really really really... Magnificent!!!!!
lolz
Awesome!
Keep writing!

Love
Tina
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