Aw..Good poem so sad though.
im really sorry.
its a 5/5, stay strong.!
It would be nice if you looked at my poems and told me what you think
thanks ! keep up the good work.
once again..im sorry.

hey yuniardi, that was great. I loved it
specially the last sentence. a really touching poem and beautifully written.
take care,
marjan

hey yuniardi, that was so great and touching. I loved it specially the last
sentence.
take care,
marjan

great poem yuniardi.
thank you so much for commenting
on my poems.
I really appreciate that.
wish you the best,
marjan

great poem yuniardi.
thank you so much for commenting
on my poems.
I really appreciate that.
wish you the best,
marjan

great poem yuniardi.
thank you so much for commenting
on my poems.
I really appreciate that.
wish you the best,
marjan

Really deep I like it.

This is a very well written poem. Ths diction is just fantastic. I must tell you that you are very talented indeed. The punctuation is off at times, but the effect it created was excellent. Furthermore, I like the imagery you use. The rhymes are a bit forced at times, but still, this is a good poem. Well done.

I wanted to read the comments on this poem and I just realized what a mistake I had done. three same comments and then another two.
sorry for that.