by LostHopesCrimsonTears Jul 26, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Everywhere you look theres a story to be told. |
A very dark and sinister poem, some of the ideas behind this I didnt agree with but you have clearly put much thought into it. It was very erm... for lack of a better word it draws you in and is almost hypnotic...very different... |
by Synh
Beautiful. Excellent. 5/5 |
WOW!!! Very well written!!! Dark but beautiful!!! You have an amazing talent!!! Great Job!! The things i like about your poems is your an unique writer so u dont find poems that are just like yours!! Your on my favs!!! 5/5 |
by Ariana
Wow, this is a very different poem. First off I really liked how you can keep to a structure without having to rhyme! Also you keep a dark atmosphere up throughout the poem, even if you are speaking of something positive. I'd suggest tweaking the ending a tiny bit, because it doesn't sound like an ending to me - maybe divide the last lines up a bit more so the main idea is emphasised? Apart from that though this was very different and interesting to read - nice work :) |
by J Lau
Beautifully written. Dark... emotional... deep. So much thoughts all mingled into one poem and well expressed. Good write. Keep up the good work! 5/5 |